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The article I chose to critique is Sociotechnology.
Strengths: sources, links, organization
Weakness: citations, biases, content length
Editing Black Brook (Passaic River)
There is not enough information in this article.
Added two sentences about water quality.
Edited again to combine both sentences.
Added website citation.
This is a user sandbox of Bdalce. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |