User:Brook597/sandbox

I made some small changes to the grammar and mechanics of Republicanism in the United States in order to make it easier to read and flow correctly. I deleted repeated ands, added commas in place of repeated ands, and reworded part of a sentence to help it make sense. Brook597 (talk) 17:12, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

I am currently working on a lead for Death rates in the 20th Century. Here is my draft. Death Rates in the 20th Century is the ratio of deaths compared to the population around the world throughout the 20th century. When giving these ratios, they are most commonly expressed by number of deaths per 1,000 people per year. Many Factors contribute to death rates such as cause of death, increasing the death rate, an aging population, which could increase and decrease the death rates by birth rates, and improvements in public health, decreasing the death rate. Brook597 (talk) 03:46, 3 November 2015 (UTC)