User:Daniel Sweeney
Appearance
This user is a student editor in Arizona_State_University/HST_100_2017_Fall_B_-_Global_History_Before_1500_(2017_Fall_B). |
Article Evaluation
[edit]Article evaluation for: "Gassantoda Castle"
The article lacks any reliable sources to collaborate the provided information.
The article states that the castle was regarded as the most impregnable castle in Japan but offers no incite as to why that was.
The article lacks information on when the castle was initially constructed and by whom.
Seems to focus more on Mōri Motonari rather than what actually happened to the castle after it was overtaken by him.
Mentions that the castle's ruins are all that currently remain of the castle but not anything about why the castle is in ruins.
Says the ruins are one of Japan's historical sites but no mention of when it was declared so.
Daniel Sweeney (talk) 20:40, 12 November 2017 (UTC)Daniel Sweeney