User:Dmvhustler/sandbox
Hello Professor Vitak and Class. The article I choose to edit/contribute information is: Responsive web design the same Article I chose to Critique in Week 2 Assignment.
Notes/Suggestions for editing Responsive Web Designs Article
Link: Responsive web design
- As previously mentioned, article contains many dead-links in the citation section
- Article contains blog posts as credible sources.
- Article contains grammatical errors and run on sentences
- Added content to the definition section
- Included purpose and overall goal of Responsive Web Design
- Also mentioned what a design team will focus on to meet criteria and objectives
- Examples include: Content, Design, Performance (Appropriately referenced Nielsen Norman Group)
- Note I was sked to first put my link in the Article's Discussion Page for approval
- However I did note that many blog posts must have been approved because there are several of these articles
- Just requested approval for my added content on the articles discussion page.
- Argued Reasons for adding content (definition lacked purpose and goals for RWD's)
- Pending Approval
- As of right now the content will remain on the page
 | This is a user sandbox of Dmvhustler. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Hello Professor Vitak and Class. The article I choose was Information Science -> Human-Computer Interaction -> User Interfaces -> Responsive Web Designs subcategory.
Notes For Responsive Web Designs Article Critique
Link: Responsive web design
- This article covers in great detail, the full subject of Responsive Web Designs
- Article Focuses on: Defining, History and challenges with Responsive Web Designs
- Specifically Focuses on: PC to Mobile Transition of Web Site Layout
- Suggests other Approaches to Multi-Device Layout Patterns
- Overall: Length and Detail is sufficient
- Too much paraphrasing used in History and Challenges section of the article
- Purpose of excessive paraphrasing: to make topics and concepts of Responsive Web Design much easier to grasp and understand
- Article contains some grammatical errors, making some of the content more difficult to read and understand
- Some Sources are in violation of Wikipedia standards
- Found Blog Sources and Original/Opinionated Articles
- Not all facts are appropriately referenced with a reliable source
- Article sentence structure needs to be revisited as some sentences come off as opinionated
- Multiple links do not provide page numbers where information was obtained (makes harder to search for and validate information)