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User:Emcam03/Manatee conservation/MileenaMKX Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Emcam03

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Emcam03/Manatee conservation
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Manatee conservation

Evaluate the drafted changes

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello! I think you are on the right track for how to begin your draft. The only suggestion I have is to add more specifics as to how the laws have helped the Antillean species grow, as you are stating that it has helped the species without providing more details how.

Thank you I'm looking into that now!