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Multiple sub-sections of this article including "symptoms" and "prognosis" lack any citations to external references. Additionally, information within these sections is vague and minimal. I believe this article would benefit from adding a greater variety of sources including relevant research articles easily found within medical and genetics journals. This would strengthen the depth and reliability of the wikipedia page. Secondly, I feel the flow of the article's sub-headings could be improved and that coverage of topics concerning the syndrome is unbalanced. Adding sections focusing on the pathogenesis, genetic basis, and symptomatic physiology of the genetic syndrome would broaden the scope of information presented as well as strengthen the page as a comprehensive, yet concise, reference for readers.