User:Erinford44/Job strain/Dreya00 Peer Review
Peer review[edit]
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info[edit]
- Whose work are you reviewing? Erinford44
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Erinford44/Job strain
Lead[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
Lead evaluation[edit]
I did not really see a lead or anything stating what new content would be added.
Content[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic?
- Is the content added up-to-date?
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Content evaluation[edit]
I think the content that has been added could be expanded even further. I think going into more detail on how each stressor is caused and ways to cope would be good and also providing a reference section and providing the number correspondence versus putting the website under the information. I believe with more content and reorganizing the article there will be a higher level of progress shown.
Tone and Balance[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
Tone and balance evaluation[edit]
The content I read is fairly neutral, but it is gender divided heavily. I think in the generalization of job strain the genders are less important than the causes and resources that are available or need to be available. I think the main issue with my ability to peer edit this well is the lack of organization and content that is currently represented.
Sources and References[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
- Are the sources current?
- Check a few links. Do they work?
Sources and references evaluation[edit]
The content has sources, however the sources are not organized correctly or cited correctly. The way I found easiest to cite sources is to use the cite button to add the citation, copy and paste the citation in a reference section at the bottom of the page (using the heading button to headline the reference section.) Adding this section will help keep information concise and improve organization.
Organization[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
Organization evaluation[edit]
Same thing as the previous section, I think adding more sections and a reference section will improve the organization. As of right now I feel like organization and content are the biggest aspects that need work.
Images and Media[edit]
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
- Are images well-captioned?
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
Images and media evaluation[edit]
N/A
For New Articles Only[edit]
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
New Article Evaluation[edit]
N/A
Overall impressions[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- How can the content added be improved?
Overall evaluation[edit]
Overall I think there definitely room for improvement for sure with this article mostly regarding content and organization. I think once the few issues are resolved then this article will be a great revision and will provide much needed information all in one place. I believe this topic is very touchy right now in the current social circumstances and that information should continue to remain very unbiased. I am excited for this class to contribute to something that impacts more than just us!