User:Esk00/Possible articles to work on
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#1) Article title: Microtargeting
-Things to improve:
- the article's structure, grammar and sentence structure, improved list of sources, article needs to present a worldwide view, addition of a section that address the implications of microtargeting on underrepresented populations. In other words, does microtargeting, disproportionately affect people of a certain race, ethnicity or economic background?; Removal of long quotes that are irrelevant and don't contribute beneficial information; Possibly, additional information on the technology behind microtargeting e.g algorithms
#2) Article title: Ecoauthoritarianism
-Things to improve:
- article is a stub-class on the quality scale therefore it needs more detail.
- Currently, the article neutrality is being disputed
- Bias from past writers of the article due to close connections to topic
- Needs to present a world-wide perspective
- Sentence structure and grammar
- article is missing the history of the word "ecological authoritarianism"
- Needs more references that shows why the topic is important/significant
#3) Article title: Democratic globalization
-Things to improve:
- Article is rated stub-class but rated high importance
- Use of pronouns incorrectly
- further background information necessary
- quote without citation
- Lead section too long--supposed to be quick summary
- Needs a more formal tone