User:HDDeCoste/Troy Laundry Building (Portland, Oregon)/Pdxpendable Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing? HDDeCoste
- Link to draft you're reviewing: Troy Laundry Building (Portland, Oregon)
Lead evaluation
[edit]The lead you created remains concise, but offers good detail as to what the article will likely be about as you add in more information. You cover key points including architecture and historical details. I think you chose good topics from your draft to cover in the Wikipedia article. Nicely done
Content evaluation
[edit]As mentioned in the Lead, sections on architecture and history make great sense for content. The history section could include paragraph(s) on both the company and on major events like the fire
Tone and balance evaluation
[edit]What's there so far seems neutral. Good work.
Sources and references evaluation
[edit]The source you added thus far should be a good primary source to draw information from. Keep in mind that the date in your reference seems to have an error about date.
Organization evaluation
[edit]Not much to say thus far. Going off of your lead, organization should be relatively smooth.
Images and media evaluation
[edit]It would be great if you could find a historical photo that is available for use. It could be an old picture of the building or potentially a newspaper entry about the fire. I'm curious as to what you might find/add.
Overall evaluation
[edit]Your lead is promising and serves as a good outline of the article changes to come. I look forward to seeing you flesh things out as you find more sources.
Pdxpendable (talk) 03:48, 15 May 2020 (UTC)