User:Harmonyskye/sandbox
Article Evaluation
I am observing the article Roxy Paine[1] which notes the articles need for improvisation described as
| This article is in a list format that may be better presented using prose. (December 2018) |
It is true that the article contains lists which differ from prose in that they are less descriptive.
| This biography of a living person needs additional citations for verification. (April 2009) |
I would also recommend adding citations in order to better this article. I would especially revise the Awards section of this article because an explanation would better the already given information. I do however believe that the article is unbiased and entirely about the life and accomplishments of the individual in which the biographical article is about.
 | This is a user sandbox of Harmonyskye. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
- ^ "Roxy Paine", Wikipedia, 2019-01-01, retrieved 2019-02-17