User:Has018
Hello, I am a medical student at the University of California San Francisco editing this article as part of a class in Winter 2017. Here is my workplan:
Why?
[edit]- High priority, start quality article
- Personal interest in refugee and migrant health
- With over 65 million displaced individuals in the world today, information on mental health of migrants is likely more important than ever
Initial Analysis
[edit]- Poor sentence structure and awkward syntax
- Nonuniform use of terms
- Unclear definition of syndrome (i.e. due to stress of migration vs. wrongful diagnosis)
- Paragraphs too similar to source material
- Lacking treatment options (e.g. use of CHWs)
What Will Be Added/Augmented
[edit]- Edit for grammar, clarity, uniformity, and brevity
- Improve use of source material to avoid copyright/plagiarism
- Add section on treatment and therapy considerations
What Will Be Removed/Diminished:
[edit]- Background of Dr. Joseba Achotegui
Coordination Plan:
[edit]- Work-In-Progression (WIP) sessions on 11/27, 12/1, and 12/15
- Submit interim progress reports for WIP sessions on 12/6 and 12/11
Has018 (talk) 23:50, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
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