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Amateur actors Amateur actors are actors who do not require payment for performances. Although there are some paid professional actors who do amateur work for multiple reasons. Some may be for educational purposes or even charity events.

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Amateur actors are those who do not require payment for performances. These people may work local theaters or doing some type of charity.In Most cases these people have yet to be discovered but there are some paid professional actors who do amateur work for multiple reasons.Reasons including but not limited to charity events , educational purposes and things of that nature

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