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Peer review

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General info

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Lead

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  • Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
    • The lead is clear, concise, and understandable.
  • Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
    • Yes.
  • Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
    • It outlines the general structure of the article, but doesn't outline each of the major sections.
  • Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
    • The lead only contains information that will later be mentioned and covered in the article.
  • Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
    • The lead is concise and to the point.

Content

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  • Is the content added relevant to the topic?
    • The content is relevant to the article topic.
  • Is the content added up-to-date?
    • The sources cited are good, especially considering the oldest citation is from about 10 or 11 years ago. Good sources and good content.
  • Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
    • The content is relevant to the topic and there isn't any I would suggest removing.

Tone and Balance

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  • Is the content added neutral?
    • Included content is neutral and factual.
  • Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
    • Same as above.
  • Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
    • Viewpoints are balanced and unbiased.
  • Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
    • No, the content is justified and factual.

Sources and References

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  • Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
    • Yes, the content is cited well with good quality sources.
  • Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
    • The sources used are thorough and supportive of the content of the article.
  • Are the sources current?
    • Yes, the sources used are good quality and recent sources.
  • Check a few links. Do they work?
    • Links work.

Organization

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  • Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
    • The content was well written, but could use a good proofreading to maintain comprehension and focus on the article topic.
  • Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
    • None, but some rewording could be helpful to make things clear and easy to understand.
  • Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
    • Yes, the topic is well structured.

Images and Media

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  • Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
    • No images.
  • Are images well-captioned?
    • No images.
  • Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
    • No images.
  • Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
    • No images.

For New Articles Only

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  • Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
    • Yes, there are credible sources listed.
  • How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
    • More sources could be helpful.
  • Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
    • The article layout and structure is good and standard for a Wikipedia article.
  • Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
    • They linked to existing articles.

Overall impressions

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  • Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
    • This would make a great starting point for other users to contribute to.
  • What are the strengths of the content added?
    • Article was structured in a very legible and coherent way and the content was very informative.
  • How can the content added be improved?
    • Exploration of the individual sections of the article would be welcome and inclusion of more sources would likely expand the amount of topic coverage.