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Article Evaluation
[edit]financial inclusion review.
1.- The definition about this topic in the article come from the united nation. The article start giving some percentage of how many people have bank account in Sub-Saharan African and then mention different countries such as Philippines and india.
3.- I think the countries mentioned are no representatives for the topic. The information is disorganized and mix different topic such as financial inclusion in countries, definition by the UN, bank stability without a logic approach.
4.- The link of the first citation is broke, but the others work well and the citations support the article claims
6.- The article need information from countries from every continent, How is financial inclusion in America, Asia, Africa, Europe and Oceania. What are the new problems regarding financial inclusion and how the political change could impact financial inclusion in the world. The article should mention how technology can help financial inclusion in order everyone can access to it.
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