User:Jblockychop/Lipid pump/Meyergr Peer Review

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Owned by jblockychop

Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jblockychop/Lipid_pump?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lipid pump

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead

Could add more information about what to expect in the article. If everyone adds one sentence about their section, it should balance out nicely.

Content

The content added is relevant. It looks like the content is up to date, but a few sources could be a bit dated. However, these older sources could add to the basic knowledge of the lipid pump which is beneficial.

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral with a similar voice throughout the article. There are no heavily biased statements.

Sources and References

The sources seem to be reliable. One suggestion is to make sure that the in text citations all have the same formatting. Some come before and some come after the period in the sentence.

Organization

Overall, I think the article has a good flow. The one section that could be moved is the lipid/biological pump section. This would be helpful because it would thoroughly explain the lipid pump before you get into the case study on Calanus spp.

Images and Media

The images added so far are great with good captions, but a few more could be added to the later sections in the article.

Overall Impressions

Overall, great job. I'm looking forward to reading the final product.