User:Jdorian23
Hello my name is Jacob Dorian. I am a student at Indiana University of Pennsylvania studying Business Management. I'm also a new Wikipedian. as a part of Dr. Vetter's composition 1 writing in Wikipedia course, I'm learning all about Wikipedia.
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Article Evaluation
[edit]The article I chose: Johnstown, Pennsylvania
My Notes:
The article for the most part was relevant there was a few things I think that didn't need to be in the article
43 miles south west of Altoona doesn't seem to relevant to the article
also the fact that they gave the 2010 population and then gave estimated population for 2013 also seemed irrelevant
the mention of the city's name in a Bruce Springsteen seems rather irrelevant
for the most part it stayed on topic
the article seemed unbiased
nothing was really overstated in the article except the "In arts and literature section" a lot seemed irrelevant
there could be more detail about the flood of 1889 because that was a huge event in Johnstown
the links I tried all worked they took me to websites where the information could be fact checked
there is a part of the article that talked about unemployment and the what kinds of jobs there are that needs a citation
some of the things came from the census bureau so that would be unbiased and facts and neutral
every thing seems to be up to date in the article
I feel they could have added more about the 1889 flood and how if happened and who was involved
the talk page showed places that were bias they said it looked like it had been written by a local the way the described the city but that part has been fixed
people also talked about fixing external links on he page
the article is rated c class
it is rated high importance
it is part of project Pennsylvania
also WikiProject Cities
I believe It did a good job of informing and education me I learned things I didn't know about my home town
Ready Player One is a novel by Earnest Client [1]
Reference
[edit]- ^ Client, Earnest (2011). Ready Player One. New York, New York: Crown Publisher.