User:Jhareemy

Hi, I am estimating that you have a byte count of 1,818 so you have approximately 3,182 bytes left!

Just looking at the original wiki page, this is a great page to edit and a lot of work could be done. As I was reviewing your page, I had a few recommendation:

The Purpose and Use section is a really good idea to have. I would recommend extending the page. You could give background information and the purpose for writing the book to begin with. You could answer questions like: Was it heavily used during the time? What were the views of the book? Was it well accepted? reject?

Edit: The book gave practical direction to each party involved in the birthing process, which included the mother, father, and midwife. You have a sub section titled Personal Beliefs… Is this your personal beliefs? I would consider making that a little clearer to the readers.

I would consider creating another section discussing the children's book featuring a character based on her.

I would probably take out the contributions to medicine section and make that the intro to the page. I think it would be a cleaner 'Wiki' look.

Here's a source you can consider implementing: http://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=VizP6wtqtQIC&oi=fnd&pg=PR7&dq=jane+sharp&ots=rSId7cDmt2&sig=eQ3_VD2LME31UD9pIx4vpO4Rpz0#v=onepage&q=jane%20sharp&f=false