User:Jugem Jugem 1945/Kat Calvin/MachInX19 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info[edit]

Whose work are you reviewing?

DFloresVVC, Crystat8462, Ewalker05, Anahi.0812

Link to draft you're reviewing: User:DFloresVVC/Kat Calvin
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]

Lead

The Lead introduces the subject well, and gets to the point on what the topic is about. the inclusion of Calvin's advocacy for Minorities in STEM fields could be expanded on, but aside from that everything is up to board.

Content

The content added is concise and relevant, but I feel there should be more. A few of the projects Calvin has created should be expanded on. While a Majority of the sources used are up-to-date, there are a few sources that are pretty old in comparison. Additionally, a lot of the big points feel glossed-over.

Tone and Balance

There doesn't appear to be any bias in the Article. The sources are used relatively evenly. It's a relatively short article, but there's no issues here.

Sources and References

The Sources are relatively up-to-date. Most of the content from the sources is reflected in the article. Maybe add/get more information about the organizations Kat is a part of, however. The links for the foundations provided work.

Organization

The Article is quick and to the point. There are a few grammatical slip-ups (namely some punctuation could help) but it's not a big deal at all. As a Biography it's well-spaced out.

Overall Impressions

This was a great article. A good Lead with great setup, but it does have a few small problems here and there. A lot of the traits for a good Article are there, though: A Neutral Tone, Even Sources, and Relevant information. Some of that information could be expanded on, however. Go into her studies, her entrepreneurship, and add more about her organizations. What have Spread the Vote and Project ID Done? Add that to your article.