User:Lormi001/Phillipe Cunningham/De.small1 Peer Review

Peer review

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? Lormi001
• Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Lormi001/sandbox

I hope I used the correct page, I'm going off of the email I got and this is the page with information I could find.

It looks like the links you have are pretty good. The biography quote you have could be an interesting quote box on the page. The information on his family is good, it's similar to how other Wikipedia articles are structured. I think the endorsement information i interesting and also gives opportunities to connect the article to others with blue links. All I can really see on this page are notes but I can't tell what you are going to do to change the article.