User:Lshane23/2020 United States presidential election/SumayyahGhori Peer Review
Peer review[edit]
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info[edit]
- Whose work are you reviewing? (Lshane23)
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Lshane23/2020 United States presidential election
Lead[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?No
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?No
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?No
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?No
Lead evaluation[edit]
Content[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic?No
- Is the content added up-to-date?No
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?Yes
- Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?No
Content evaluation[edit]
Tone and Balance[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?Yes
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?No
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?No
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?No
Tone and balance evaluation[edit]
Sources and References[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?Yes
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?No
- Are the sources current?Yes
- Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?No
- Check a few links. Do they work?Yes
Sources and references evaluation[edit]
Organization[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?No
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?No
Organization evaluation[edit]
Images and Media[edit]
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?No
- Are images well-captioned?No images
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? No images
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?N images
Images and media evaluation[edit]
For New Articles Only[edit]
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
New Article Evaluation[edit]
Overall impressions[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? I think that the editor has some work to do in completing the draft- there really only is one valid line for the draft, the rest is brainstorming. I think it is a great start, but could use some more time to be fully formed!
- What are the strengths of the content added? Well-backed up
- How can the content added be improved? More content, better structure.