User:Madison.myr484/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article[edit]

This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.

Name of article: Mycoplasma bovis
Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate: I am very interested in this microbe because it has detrimental effects on cattle production in many areas of the world. It can cause many different types of disease in different ages of cattle and a solid knowledge basis around this microbe is vital for practicing veterinarians.

Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? yes, they talk about other animals being susceptible but do not mention it further
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? concise

Is the article's content relevant to the topic? yes
Is the content up-to-date? Maybe, some of the references are quite old.
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? I would say there is definitely missing content and areas that require further explanation
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? no

Is the article neutral? yes
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
Are the sources current? Most of them
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? Most sound like white men so no.
Check a few links. Do they work? yes

Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? few
Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? none
How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? Rated C-Class. Apart of two projects; Veterinary Medicine and Microbiology
How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? More general for public knowledge

What is the article's overall status? Concise information for beginner. Needs more information and more depth.
What are the article's strengths? Information is easy to find, is concise, easy to read for beginners.
How can the article be improved? Some sections could use more information and to be further explored. Could use some more recent references, especially for it's incidence reporting.
How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed? Under-developed

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