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Hi Mogism,

As part of a people of Armenian origin group, I participated to the building of “Laurence Kirwan” Wikipedia page. We thought that Dr Kirwan's was worth mentioning on Wikipedia, for his action during the Yerevan earthquake, and as a public notable person.

That page went through the reviewing and admittance processes. It has been validated on numerous occasions, by major and neutral users' revisions.

Later on, as legitimate revisions were being done from time to time, conflictive and negative edits appeared.

While 100 % of the neutral/technical edits and revisions were being done by identified users, 100 % of negative edits were being done by anonimous  IPs.

These negative edits were mainly ironical, using special wording like: Kirwan was “only licenced for...” “Kirwan uses a so-called breast "auto augmentation" technique.", (The same IP deleted the "breast auto-augmentation" paragraph in the "breast surgey" or "breast augmentation" Wikipedia page) Kirwan was names by a “free daily newspaper tabloid in London” “ In August 2012, Chelsea Kirwan called the police and Laurence Kirwan was charged with third degree assault and disorderly conduct.[15] Kirwan hired a public relations team.[16] Kirwan was banned from Hospital of St John and St Elizabeth in St John's Wood after his arrest.” (omitting that he had been reinstated one month later) etc...

We have tried to bring reliable secondary source information, to rectify that negative or ironical tone. Sometimes it has been left. Most of the imes, the same IPs deleted it. We lately brought information from the french magazine PARIS MATCH, which is one of the most reliable secondary source in France, and show that Kirwan's personal life should not be edited the way the anonimous IPs did it. Again, an IP deleted it.

Last but not least, one of those IPs sent us a message accusing us to actually Be Laurence Kirwan himself, or be closely related to him !!! Finally, the same IP edited a warning window on top of the page, threatening to have it deleted.

There is a strong suspicion that those negative IPs' edits might have been done, in fact, by the same person, who obviously has direct or indirect personal problems with Dr Kirwan.

Checking other notable doctors and surgeons Wikipedia pages, we positively think that the admitted version of Laurence Kirwan 's Wikipedia page was only neutral and informative, and absolutely not promotional.

Could you please tell us if there is a way to understand and rectify what is going on with those negative edits ?

Should that matter be brought to a Wikipedia Verification Board ? We thank you in advance for your answer. Fairproject Fairproject (talk) 13:55, 22 April 2015 (UTC)

PS: Please see bellow the different types of edits above mentionned.

MAJOR USERS EDITS AND LAURENCE KIRWAN'S WIKIPEDIA PAGE ADMITANCE:

09:39, 26 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (9,188 bytes) (-10)‎ . . (→‎References: no longer a Stub) 09:24, 26 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (9,198 bytes) (+54)‎ . . (added Category:British expatriates in the United States using HotCat) 19:10, 25 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,168 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Dodger67 moved page Laurence Kirwan (physician) to Laurence Kirwan: Remove unnecessary disambiguation - there is no other "Laurence Kirwan" article on WP) 18:11, 25 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,147 bytes) (-96)‎ . . (Refer to the subject only by surname after the initial introduction states their full name. See WP:MOSBIO)

14:40, 25 November 2013‎ Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,312 bytes) (-537)‎ . . (Cleanup following Wikipedia:Articles for creation creation (AFCH)) 14:40, 25 November 2013‎ Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,849 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi moved page Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Laurence Kirwan (physician) to Laurence Kirwan (physician): Created via Articles for creation (you can help!) (AFCH)) 04:19, 25 November 2013‎ JSFarman (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,849 bytes) (+554)‎ . . (Commenting on Wikipedia:Articles for creation submission (AFCH)) 17:19, 23 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,295 bytes) (-60)‎ . . (→‎Breast surgery: Never wikilink a Draft article - link to the actual article title, even if it doesn't exist yet) 17:16, 23 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,355 bytes) (-10)‎ . . (Fixing a wikilink - never use a wikipedia page as a reference) 01:40, 28 October 2013‎ GB fan (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,365 bytes) (-14)‎ . . (decline speedy delete, A criteria do not apply here) 00:59, 28 October 2013‎ Greatpumkin (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,379 bytes) (+14)‎ . . 13:32, 25 October 2013‎ Citation bot (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,365 bytes) (-332)‎ . . ([458]Combined duplicate references. | User-activated.) 12:50, 25 October 2013‎ Rankersbo (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,697 bytes) (-609)‎ . . (Cleaning Wikipedia:Articles for creation submission (AFCH beta))

10:42, 25 October 2013‎ RHaworth (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,699 bytes) (-1,430)‎ . . (

) 12:43, 10 October 2013‎ Aggie80 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (6,250 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Aggie80 moved page User:Fairproject/sandbox to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Laurence Kirwan (physician): Preferred location for Articles for creation)


NEUTRAL USERS EDITS:

20:33, 2 March 2015‎ Mogism(talk | contribs)‎ m . . (9,687 bytes) (+1)‎ . . (→‎Personal life: Cleanup/Typo fixing, typo(s) fixed: admited → admitted using AWB) 05:33, 18 February 2015‎ BG19bot(talk | contribs)‎ m . . (9,698 bytes) (-126)‎ . . (→‎Personal life: WP:CHECKWIKI error fix for #93. External link with double http:// Do general fixes if a problem exists. -, replaced: http://http:// → http:// (3) using AWB (10822)) 02:34, 8 December 2014‎ AnomieBOT(talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,974 bytes) (+19)‎ . . (Dating maintenance tags: ) 02:13, 8 December 2014‎ Dl2000(talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,955 bytes) (+23)‎ . . (en-GB; tidy) 11:14, 25 August 2014‎ John of Reading(talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,932 bytes) (+3)‎ . . (→‎Honors: Typo fixing, replaced: one the 1000 → one of the 1000 using AWB) 12:13, 23 July 2014‎ Wtmitchell (Reverted edits by 24.213.177.78 (talk): addition of unsourced content (HG) 07:34, 21 July 2014‎ 87.240.230.245 (talk)‎ . . (8,450 bytes) (+81)‎ . . (verified and updated ASPS certifications) 08:23, 5 July 2014‎ BG19bot (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,369 bytes) (-115)‎ . . (→‎Personal life: WP:CHECKWIKI error fix for #17. Category duplication. Do general fixes if a problem exists. - using AWB (10270)) 20:02, 4 July 2014‎ Magioladitis (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,484 bytes) (-153)‎ . . (clean up using AWB (10274)) 17:59, 2 July 2014‎ Fairproject (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,806 bytes) (+2,239)‎ . . (Remove non BPL, WP:NPOV (Neutral Point of View) edits, back to last WP:NPOV review from Quebec99) 22:12, 24 June 2014‎ AnomieBOT (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,711 bytes) (+15)‎ . . (Dating maintenance tags: [dubious ]) 20:57, 7 April 2014‎ Magioladitis (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (11,138 bytes) (-3)‎ . . (clean up using AWB (10072)) 19:44, 20 February 2014‎ Quebec99 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,806 bytes) (+190)‎ . . (fixed references) 08:14, 2 February 2014‎ Rjwilmsi (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,616 bytes) (+17)‎ . . (Journal cites, added 1 issue number using AWB (9901)) 08:43, 7 January 2014‎ BattyBot (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,327 bytes) (-23)‎ . . (fixed CS1 errors: dates & General fixes using AWB (9832)) 17:42, 12 December 2013‎ ChrisGualtieri (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (10,350 bytes) (-648)‎ . . (Checkwiki 61 + General Fixes using AWB) 10:50, 3 December 2013‎ Bigesian (talk | contribs)‎ . . (10,802 bytes) (+1,333)‎ . . (remove unverified cites, improve cites, copyedit to reflect cites) 01:37, 27 November 2013‎ ChrisGualtieri (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (9,449 bytes) (+235)‎ . . (Checkwiki 61 + General Fixes using AWB) 01:16, 27 November 2013‎ Callanecc (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (9,214 bytes) (-11)‎ . . (Fix file name after move) 09:48, 26 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (9,157 bytes) (-30)‎ . . (Citizenship is one of those things that must always be referenced to a proper reliable source) 19:28, 25 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,149 bytes) (-19)‎ . . (→‎Publications about plastic surgery: Removed another deprecated inline external 18:38, 25 November 2013‎ AnomieBOT (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (8,168 bytes) (+19)‎ . . (Dating maintenance tags: [citation needed]) 18:17, 25 November 2013‎ Dodger67 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (8,149 bytes) (+2)‎ . . (→‎Awards: Removed useless and deprecated inline external links - managed to track down one real reference. Please see WP:REFB)


NEGATIVE IP's EDITS:

21:41, 15 April 2015‎ 70.192.64.145(talk). . (9,221 bytes) (+31)‎ 10:10, 13 April 2015‎ 70.192.70.162(talk)‎ . . (9,190 bytes) (-497)‎ . . (Undid revision 655959977 by 195.55.112.72 (talk)) 06:20, 1 April 2015‎ 12.180.133.18(talk)‎ . . (9,190 bytes) (-497)‎ . . (→‎Personal life: blp robert kennedy) 11:35, 20 February 2015‎ 2600:1017:b823:edf6:c82b:db92:2094:56b0(talk)‎ . . (9,189 bytes) (-551)‎ . . (Undid revision 648025649 by 88.121.6.27 (talk) inaccurate edit summary) (undo) 14:38, 18 February 2015‎ 108.27.38.227 (talk)‎ . . (9,189 bytes) (+215)‎ . . (→‎Personal life: adding back that he was reinstated. unfortunately, the *only* source for this is a tabloid) 14:35, 18 February 2015‎ 108.27.38.227(talk)‎ . . (8,974 bytes) (-724)‎ . . (reverted tabloid additions) 12:15, 23 July 2014‎ 24.213.177.78 (Undid revision 618114258 by Wtmitchell (talk) I did not add any unsourced content. Literally look at what I did.) 12:12, 23 July 2014‎ 24.213.177.78 (talk)‎ . . (8,369 bytes) (-81)‎ . . (This version is true -- click on the source yourself) 02:08, 3 July 2014‎ 64.134.67.190 (talk)‎ . . (8,535 bytes) (-2,271)‎ . . (Undid revision 615325213 by Fairproject (talk) *this* version is backed up by sources, the other version is inaccurate, promotional and misleading) 03:01, 28 June 2014‎ 70.192.66.98 (talk)‎ . . (8,500 bytes) (-111)‎ . . (Not notable he was interviewed on channel 12 ct news) 01:58, 25 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,040 bytes) (-652)‎ . . (deleted repeated sentences) 23:36, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,692 bytes) (+230)‎ . . (→‎Personal life) 23:09, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,462 bytes) (-95)‎ . . (→‎Education and career: deleted unsourced claim) 23:04, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,457 bytes) (-56)‎ . . (→‎Awards: deleted unsourced claim) 23:03, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,513 bytes) (-134)‎ . . (→‎Awards: invalid source) 23:02, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,647 bytes) (-359)‎ . . (making this sound less like a press release) 22:59, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,006 bytes) (-456)‎ . . (→‎Education and career: deleted false claims, altered wording) 22:56, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,462 bytes) (-34)‎ . . (Kirwan is definitely not affiliated with New York Eye and Ear Infirmary (look at their wesbite)) 22:38, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,496 bytes) (+398)‎ . . (→‎Personal life) 22:26, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,098 bytes) (+166)‎ . . (→‎Personal life) 22:24, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (9,932 bytes) (-974)‎ . . (deleted wholly unsourced claims) 22:22, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (11,147 bytes) (+233) 22:20, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,914 bytes) (+203)‎ . . (→‎Personal life) 20:11, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,696 bytes) (+281)‎ . . (→‎Personal life) 20:08, 24 June 2014‎ 64.134.66.117 (talk)‎ . . (10,415 bytes) (-391)‎ . . 17:34, 6 April 2014‎ Jamesgill1 (talk | contribs)‎ . . (11,306 bytes) (+495)‎ . . (→‎Arrest Record) (undo) (Tag: gettingstarted edit) 16:37, 6 April 2014‎ 24.45.141.225 (talk)‎ . . (10,983 bytes) (+177)‎ . . (→‎References: Laurence Kirwan Arrest record)

Fairproject (talk) 13:55, 22 April 2015 (UTC)