User:Mora Josh/Language deprivation/RCovell Peer Review

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Peer review[edit]

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info[edit]

  • Whose work are you reviewing? Mora Josh
  • Link to draft you're reviewing: Language deprivation

Overall evaluation[edit]

It was good though some grammar editing is needed. I did some changes in the wording & grammar. I also added a citation to Neil Glickman and could also add Sanjay Gulati's lecture on Language Deprivation Syndrome if you'd like.

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