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User:Nateleboeuf/In My Father's Kitchen/Sean.dempsey1231 Peer Review

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Whose work are you reviewing?
Nateleboeuf
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:User:Nateleboeuf/In My Father's Kitchen:
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Everything in the article is related to In My Father's Kitchen. The article talks about some of their programs and service to the community which I found interesting. The article is neutral and only describes the facts about the organization, what they do, their mission etc. The majority of the article talks about what is GOOD about In My Father's Kitchen. I like to see more about their struggles or past history. The majority of the links work and I was able to see them. The majority of the information was from the last 5 or so years which I would say is relevant. A couple of them were from 2013 which I think is a little outdated.