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Needs Improvement

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Performance

  • Clearly more information could be provided
  • Lead could use more clarity (see later bullet)
  • More headers and sections needed to show variety
  • Expand upon the existing content in the contents (likely through reorganization)
  • Lead is vague with definitions
  • Unclear language
  • Some minor copyedits needed

Human geography

  • The sections need to be more organized
  • Could be through fleshing out sections/combining with other sections
  • Lots of headers following large chunks of text
  • Likely needs reorganization/reformatting of information

Articles to Work on

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  1. Performance
  2. Comic timing
  3. Human geography

The Problem:

  • The lead is very long and could be condensed with information bumped into other sections/subsections
  • Lead has too much detail
  • Sections could use reorganization
  • Feminist theory paragraph doesn’t make sense
  • List of Notable Figures could be organized instead of being one long list
  • Social movements section is awkward and short

Tasks:

  • Make Second Wave a section under History (3.2) and move the corresponding years to be subsections to correspond with the lead
  • Make new section/subsection for any additional unique info found only in the lead
  • Need to put Feminist theory in relation to theory in Mexico
  • Put a tag to Feminist theory underneath the header
  • Look at History section and look for "issues" to make a new section
  • Put info about indigenous women’s rights
  • Look to see what can be condensed
  • Group events by instances
  • The first three sentences in 1990 section could be condensed, a bit off-topic
  • Ask about groupings of time in the History section on the talk page
  • Move History Section after Feminist Theory, before Gender Rebels
  • Save this for last
  • Look into people listed on the Notable Figures section
  • Model section after that of Feminism in India
  • Cite Wikipedia article source for this info
  • See if Social movements section is able to be moved or integrated into another section
  • Check for bias

The Problem:

  • Simplify Expansion packs section to model the Sims 4 Expansion pack section
  • See also the Expansion only subsection in existing article
  • Expansion pack section also needs verification
  • Two sections list similar info and should be reorganized

Tasks:

  • Figure out how to organize Gameplay section
  • Use template for Expansion only subsection to modify current Expansion pack section
  • Briefly research to verify that info in this section is correct
  • Potentially add citations?
  • Compare Sims 4 and StarCraft pages to determine the best course of action
  • Determine approach for reorganization
  • Expansions only falls under Compilations heading rather than Expansion packs
  • See if Expansions only subsection can fall under Expansion packs heading
  • Leave Core game with expansions as the only subsection under Compilations heading
  • Potentially add a Cultural impact section and reorganize information under Reception
  • Ports and remakes can be moved to expansions and versions