User:Pammul/Clinical psychology
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- Transpersonal – The transpersonal perspective places a stronger focus on the spiritual facet of human experience. It is not a set of techniques so much as a willingness to help a client explore spirituality and/or transcendent states of consciousness. Transpersonal psychology is concerned with helping clients achieve their highest potential
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Transpersonal psychology is also concerned with examining the neurological change that occur to the brain during transcendence.
Note: I am still in the process of finding sources for this subject, so as I find sources it is likely that I will add more information.
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Hartelius, G., Krippner, S., & Thouin-Savard, M. I. (2017). Transpersonal and Psychology: An Experiment in Inclusivity and Rigor. The International Journal of Transpersonal Studies, 36(1), iii+. https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A584329702/AONE?u=birm97026&sid=bookmark-AONE&xid=82ef0da5
This source will be used to define transpersonal psychology. In my own words, it focuses on understanding the dynamics of transcendence, which is different for everyone. It aims to help a person reach their own transcendence. Transpersonal psychology is also concerned with examining the neurological changes that the brain goes through during transcendence.
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I would suggest that you place your proposed edit in bold/italics and integrate it into the existing article excerpts you brought into your sandbox. This will give the reviewer a better understanding of how your proposed edits will integrate with existing content.
I would recommend your revise your proposed edits as follows: "Transpersonal psychology is also concerned with examining neurological changes that occur in the brain during transcendence."
I would suggest that while an interesting reference, you may wish to investigate actual review articles. The citation above appears to be an editorial.