User:Qihan Peng/Blueberry Site/Haleydean Peer Review

Peer review

I am reviewing Qihan Peng's work at User:Qihan Peng/Blueberry Site. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors in this draft, and the first sentence of the introduction was a run on sentence, but that can be fixed pretty easily. Overall this user included very good information, but it would be helpful to include more analysis of this information and to separate it into clearly defined sections of the article. Perhaps this user could consider describing each of the 4 periods of Belle Glade culture, or separating the middle paragraph into excavation, artifact description, and what the archaeologists learned about the culture through these artifacts. Also, in-text citations are needed throughout the article, and I saw on the bibliography page that only 1 source was used so try to get a few more credible sources. Overall, very good and engaging information but more organization of your thoughts is needed. An image or map may also enhance the article.