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The lead was informative and not overwhelming for the reader. It gave the reader a good description of what Business Informatics (BI) is. The lead could have given more precise information for what BI was rather than just saying what BI includes. The lead should include more information about what business informatics is. There is no breakdown of the sections in the article. The lead isn’t too long for the reader, but again should include more information about what business informatics is and what it can be used for.

The article’s content does give some good information regarding business informatics, but the primary focus of the information is comparing it to information systems. The content should actually give more information about what business informatics is, business informatics history from conception, examples of its use. Some of the content does show what fields of study this discipline could be useful, but it does not explain what can be gained by learning/applying the discipline.

The article is neutral and does not have a bias, the content in the article is informative and does not try to persuade the reader to learn the discipline. Although there is a comparative quality to the content of BI versus IS, but it is mostly looking at the difference between the two.

The references in the article are limited and are rather old. Although the information on the topic is up to date since it has been updated many times over the past couple years, the references cited in the article are from more than ten years ago.

The content in the article is well-written and does not have any grammatical errors. The information given in the article is well-organized, although there could be more information on the topic.

There are no images in the article.

Overall, there article could have more information that explains better what business informatics is, how it can be applied in society, a brief history of the topic. For what is provided it is well-written, but the information is limited and should include more sections to give the reader a better insight on what business informatics is.