User:Radroni21/Kenneth Oakley/Lilly861 Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? Radroni21
• Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Radroni21/Kenneth Oakley

Lead

Guiding questions:

• Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? yes
• Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
• Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
• Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? yes
• Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? yes

Content

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
• Is the content added up-to-date? yes
• Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? no

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added neutral? yes
• Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
• Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

• Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
• Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
• Are the sources current? yes
• Check a few links. Do they work? yes

Organization

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
• Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? yes
• Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? no
• Are images well-captioned? N/a
• Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/a
• Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/a

Images and media evaluation

I don't think images are necessarily needed for this topic.

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

• Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? yes
• What are the strengths of the content added?
• How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation

Very well done! The content you added is thorough and provides a lot of missing information about Kenneth Oakly.