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  • == Wiki [1] ==
  • High Speed Productions (2006) Thrasher Skate and Destroy: The First 25 Years of Thrasher Magazine
  • Thrasher magazine [2]


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Thrasher is a monthly skateboarding magazine, founded in 1981 by Kevin Thatcher, Eric Swenson, and Fausto Vitello, and published by the San Francisco, United States (U.S.)-based company, High Speed Productions, Inc.[2][3] The publication consists of skateboard- and music-related articles, photography, interviews, skatepark reviews, and miscellaneous content as well as various music interviews. The magazine also maintains a website that consists of numerous features, including segments such as "Firing Line" and "Hall of Meat", an online store, a video collection, a radio show, and a forum for registered users.[4] The company also owns and operates the Double Rock indoor skateboarding facility.

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Thrasher is a monthly skateboarding magazine, founded in 1981 by Kevin Thatcher, Eric Swenson, and Fausto Vitello[3], and published by the San Francisco, United States (U.S.)-based company, High Speed Productions, Inc.[2][3] The publication consists of skateboard- and music-related articles, photography, interviews, skatepark[4] reviews, and miscellaneous content as well as various music interviews. The magazine also maintains a website that consists of numerous features, including segments such as "Firing Line" and "Hall of Meat", an online store, a video collection, a radio show, and a forum for registered users.[4] The company also owns and operates the Double Rock indoor skateboarding facility.This skating park is used by multiple skate company's today such as Darkstar[5], Pizza Skateboards[6],Supra[7],Blind[8], and many more on ThrasherMagizine.com[9] under events. Today the Thrasher Magazine is still up and it ran buy a hard working team of editors. Thrasher also has clothing items that they sell. Recently they have teamed up with Supreme[10] and released shirts and hoodies[11]. The supreme[12]/ Thrasher collection has released in the summer of 2015 and sold out instantly.


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This skating park is used by multiple skate company's today such as Darkstar[5], Pizza Skateboards[6],Supra[7],Blind[8], and many more on ThrasherMagizine.com[9] under events. Today the Thrasher Magazine is still up and it ran buy a hard working team of editors. Thrasher also has clothing items that they sell. Recently they have teamed up with Supreme[10] and released shirts and hoodies[11]. The supreme[12]/ Thrasher collection has released in the summer of 2015 and sold out instantly.

Notes

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  1. ^ "Thrasher". Skateboarding Wiki. Retrieved 2015-10-07.
  2. ^ "Thrasher Magazine - Displaying items by tag: Junk Drawer". www.thrashermagazine.com. Retrieved 2015-11-02.
  3. ^ "Fausto Vitello". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  4. ^ "Skatepark". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  5. ^ "Darkstar". Skateboarding Wiki. Retrieved 2015-11-02.
  6. ^ "P I Z Z A". www.pizzaskateboards.com. Retrieved 2015-11-02.
  7. ^ "Supra Brand". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  8. ^ "Blind Skateboards". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  9. ^ "Thrasher Magazine - Displaying items by tag: Junk Drawer". www.thrashermagazine.com. Retrieved 2015-11-02.
  10. ^ "Supreme clothing". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  11. ^ "Hoodie". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  12. ^ "supreme clothing". {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)