User:Rmj17
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This user is a student editor in Texas_AM/Technical_Editing_(Spring_2019). |
Articles that need improvement:
[edit]- some of the sections are under developed
- brand name section seems a little small for such a big topic
- names by animals appears under-developed and unimportant (or maybe needs to be expanded upon in a separate article)
- no clear organization
- no lead section with
- no contents section