User:Rylee23

Wiki Bio

Hello visitors. Thank you for visiting my page, my name is Rylee. I am formally referred to as Rylee Worth but commonly addressed in a more casual situation in which people just call me Rylee. Still being a student at Marysville Getchell Highschool and also attending full time running start at EVCC, daily life is very busy for me and downtime is commonly used for everyday responsibilities such as housework or homework. If I am not home, you can find me in a variety of places. Most commonly during the fall season, you will find me at the tennis courts as I am a varsity tennis player for my high school. This commonly takes up the majority of my weekday afternoons during the fall. On weekends or even after tennis during the week, you can find me working my shift at The North Face. As the fall season rolls away and the winter comes flying in I am almost always on the basketball court or on the stage. The winter is basketball season and the beginning of the production of my annual musical. Basketball is not a strong suit of mine, it is more of a fun pastime that I do to keep myself busy. Now acting, on the other hand, is one of my great skills, as well as singing. Combining the two makes me a great choice for a lead roll in a high school musical production.

Article Evaluation

I visited the Will Smith page on Wikipedia, and found two aspects of it worth commenting on: In the paragraph mentioning his most notable achievements, the author(s) of the Wikipedia page failed to mention some more recent achievements of his, such as his role in Disney's recent live action take on Aladdin where he filled the shoes of Robin Williams, as Genie. It is mentioned much further into the article but majority of readers most likely won't read that far. Also although the year can be implied by some simple math, the article did not specify the year Smith's parents separated, leaving the readers curious as to how long it took before Smith's parents actually got a divorce.

Although Will Smith was very well recognized in the past, it is only a relatively recent thing that he is beginning to star/co-star in movies. He had some very exceptional work in the past with his music and his starring in the Nikelodeon television series, The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air. Fortunately for Smith his career seems to be now blowing up with his playing of Deadshot in DC's Suicide Squad. After his Suicide Squad work he was in multiple other films such as Bright, Collateral Beauty and Untogether. I am not discrediting his previous work in films such as Men in Black and Ali, but I do believe that his current work is more well known then his previous work and should be the majority of his achievements paragraph. His work in Disney's Aladdin was phenomenal and should not go unnoticed.

A divorce will play a huge part in any child's age, especially with Smith being so young at the time(13). The divorce clearly played a significant role in Smith's life story or else it would not have even been mentioned in his page. Leaving out key details such as years and or dates in such an event in someone's life story leaves us as readers with a feeling like they're missing something, or at least that's what it lead me to feel. The year of the split up could have been found by doing some simple math, for sure, but it is very much an inconvenience for a reader to have to do. It should've been stated initially.