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Article Evaluation
[edit]- Each fact has been sourced with another article or bibliography - Some sources have been archived or are outdated - Section on Manila's feature for AIDs awareness is coherent and does a decent job on introducing her career - Doesn't elaborate on how she was selected for Rupaul's Drag Race - Discography and Filmography are not sourced - Information on Personal Life rely more on articles - No sign of plagiarism - May contain bias - Wikipage is rated: Start-Class
Notes
[edit]- iTunes prohibited from being a reliable source - Not to mention All-Stars Activity on Manila Luzon's page (should be covered on series page) - Abrupt change in pronouns (she to him; hers to his) - Source 19 was retrieved 19-09-02
Improvements
[edit]- Sources for Personal Life - Sources for Discography/Filmography - Include section on Early Life (before appearance on Rupaul series) - UPdate sources for time on Rupaul's Drag Race
Biography References
[edit]https://faculty.sites.uci.edu/longbui/files/2018/10/Bui-and-Strings-Rupauls.DragRace.pdf https://search.proquest.com/docview/1705532822?accountid=14552&pq-origsite=summon