User:Shawna Lesperance/sandbox

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Question 1: Check a few citations. Do the link work?

The link Deadline day arrives; Wings waive Maltby". Sporting News. Retrieved 13 April 2015. has an error in loading the page and should not be used as a reference. Since this is a dead link, it should be removed from the reference list.

Question 2: Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

Jordan's ethnicity and aboriginal background is underrepresented in his wiki article. There needs to be more background information on the First Nation Ojibwe in Garden River First Nations, Sault Ste Marie, Ontario as this is where his father Ted Nolan's family is from and the First Nations Malisseet from St. Mary's First Nations, Fredericton, NB, where his mothers family originates. Jordan's disciplinary actions in hockey are overrepresented in his article. There is far more information on his disciplinary actions than his development as a player and his contributions to winning the Stanley Cup in 2012 with the LA Kings.

Question 3: Is anything missing that could be added?

I would like to add a giving back paragraph to highlight his contributions in the First Nations Youth communities through hockey.

Giving Back

Jordan along with his father and brother look to be positive role models and leaders in the First Nations communities by giving back through hockey and leadership. They created the Nolan's First Nations Hockey School in 2013, for the purpose of teaching First Nation's youth what it takes to be successful and how they can achieve greater things in life. Jordan continuously sets aside time during this busy schedule to visit First Nation communities around Canada.

Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).http://3nolans.com/

Shawna Lesperance (talk) 15:25, 15 March 2017 (UTC)