In general my contributions will be editorial rather than original, unless I have a good understanding of the material at hand.
My belief is that anybody, with little previous knowledge of a subject, ought to be able to understand at least the begining section of any article and that complex and convoluted writing styles are an impediment to this objective. This should NOT be 'rocket science'. Keep it simple, at least at the start, and write with clarity and conciseness.
Thank you for engaging with me on any of the changes that I might make, nobody is always right-er-correct and many writing styles are open for discussion. PRW.