User:Whimsy123/Redefining Realness/MaxB97 Peer Review
Peer review[edit]
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info[edit]
- Whose work are you reviewing? (Whimsy123)
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Whimsy123/Redefining Realness
Lead[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The first summary sentences should be your lead tbh.
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? N/A
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? N/A
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? N/A
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? N/A
Lead evaluation[edit]
Content[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
- Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? NO
Content evaluation[edit]
Tone and Balance[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral? Yes
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No
Tone and balance evaluation[edit]
Sources and References[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
- Are the sources current? Yes
- Check a few links. Do they work? An Interview With Janet Mock link does not work, it requires a login.
Sources and references evaluation[edit]
Organization[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No(t that I know of.)
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
Organization evaluation[edit]
I would add header sections within the plot summary to better organize the layout.
Images and Media[edit]
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Not yet
- Are images well-captioned? N/A
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A
Images and media evaluation[edit]
Add some images, such as the book cover if you can tiptoe your way across the landmine field that is Wikipedia Copyright guidelines.
For New Articles Only[edit]
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Sources accurately cover things so far.
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Should use some more section headings but yup.
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? YES
New Article Evaluation[edit]
Overall impressions[edit]
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? The article is definitely more complete, for an in-depth analysis is being added.
- What are the strengths of the content added? Lots of detail, lots of external links to other parts of Wikipedia.
- How can the content added be improved? More organization in the plot summary section, more parts added to reception of the novel.
Overall evaluation[edit]
You're doing great Whimsy123, I know you're drowning in a Wikipedia tsunami of work but keep it up, we're rooting for ya.