User:WilliamStadder/sandbox

Family Life

• William Stadder, born in Windsor Ontario, Canada on December 26, 1997

Article Question and Concerns

Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If bias, is this biased noted?

The article draws all the information from two sources, questioning the notability of the references. There is also a lot of questionable information that is not cited. Examples include his decision to drop out of competitive body building and him forgetting to add bronzer before a competition. I feel that although this information helps the Wiki page flow, there needs to be a source to reference it from. How did we get that information?? WilliamStadder (talk) 18:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

I think the article is missing some of his personal life, did he get married? Have kids? Extra information that would improve the quality of the biography. When looking into more information about Kevin, I found some information on his personal training, I will add that to the article. WilliamStadder (talk) 18:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?

The second reference leads to the correct website but has removed any information about Kevin O'Toole and his championships. I will delete that reference and provide the reference list with a new source where I have found information on his personal training career. The first reference, "credentials" remains accurate but has very little information. WilliamStadder (talk) 18:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)