User:Yaritzalopez/Immigration to Costa Rica/Lfreeman333 Peer Review
Peer Review[edit]
- Whose work are you reviewing?
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User: Yaritalopez/Immigration to Costa Rica
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Immigration to Costa Rica
Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]
Overall, I think that the content of the drafted changes was relevant, up to date, and enhanced the article. Adding the information about the Nicaraguan migration was not only pertinent but gave context as to why people were moving around. Here are my suggestions:
- Most of the sources for the information you added came from non-profit websites. I would try to pull more information and cite from at least one or two scholarly journals.
- The content added was good and the tone was neutral. My only suggestion would be to reduce the essay voice by removing the word "However" at the beginning of the last sentence of your drafted changes.
- I was disappointed that I could not follow your links. I would ensure that the links include the location where the information was found.
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