User:Yifanbao1/Media democracy/Ningjiang216 Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
[edit]- yifanbao1
- Media democracy
Content
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Content added is relevant and up-to-date
- Very thorough review on the definition, as well as the different tones
- Can remove some excess bullet points in the headers
Content evaluation
[edit]Tone and Balance
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Tone is mostly neutral; can be a little less narrative (ie: "Further to this point,)
- Does a good job of remaining neutreal and explaining stances (feminism)
Tone and balance evaluation
[edit]Sources and References
[edit]Guiding questions:
- good citations for those that are finished; can add more under criticism
- sources are thorough and current and reflect available literature
Organization
[edit]Guiding questions:
- concise, clear, and easy to read?
- grammar can be fixed in certain areas
- well-organized and comprehensive
Overall impressions
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Article is more complete and thorough