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Article title
Manufacturing in Japan
Article Evaluation
This article written by a natural formal, and related to the topic. But it has some citation missing and lack additional citations. Some information need to be update and remove.The whole article has some reliable quotes and covers the majority of the population no basis .
Sources
Keidanren Growth Strategy 2011: Accelerating Growth through Private-Sector Dynamism”,
http://www.keidanren.or.jp/english/policy/2011/089.html, 16 September 2011. UK Trade and Investment Website. “Japan: New Growth Strategy Announced – August 2012”. http://www.ukti.gov.uk/export/countries/asiapacific/fareast/japan/premiumcontent/356460.html. https://global.jaxa.jp

Article title
History of anime
Article Evaluation
The content of the article is relevant to the topic, and most of the articles use neutral opinions, while some of the opinions are personal so it need be fixed to be more naturl tone . Most of the claims are based on reliable quotes, and this article covers a wide range of people but little bit bias.
Sources
Sources Orr, Inge C. (1974). "Puppet Theatre in Asia". Asian Folklore Studies. Nanzan University. 33 (1): 69–84. doi:10.2307/1177504. JSTOR 1177504. Programme and notes curated by Alexander Jacoby e Johan Nordström in collaboration with National Film Center – The National Museum of Modern Art, Tokyo with the support of The Japan Foundation https://festival.ilcinemaritrovato.it/en/sezione/il-film-storico-nel-giappone-degli-anni-bui/

Article title
Animation camera
Article Evaluation
This article is in neutral language, but it lacks references, does not cover all the animation cameras that have appeared in history, and some of the links to cited articles are invalid and need to be updated.The article fits the title of the article, but can be more comprehensive by adding some details.
Sources: http://www.f.waseda.jp/kusahara/Utsushi-e/Taneita(Slides).html http://www.f.waseda.jp/kusahara/Utsushi-e/Furo,_the_lantern.html; https://chasingheartbeats.com/best-camera-for-stop-motion/

Article title
Shadow play
Article Evaluation
The whole article is neutral, with reliable quotes from different authors, covering most areas. And all the links are still valid.But I think I can modified few external Links for adding more details. few citation missing.
Sources
Book of Han chapter 6 http://www.ihchina.cn/search_result/p/2/keyword/皮影/category/24.html#page_location

Article title
Chinese animation

Article Evaluation
The article lacks information, does not comprehensively introduce the development process of Chinese animation, and does not cover all aspects. Some links and pictures do not work properly and need to be updated.
Sources
https://movie.douban.com/subject/27107605/ （a Chinese Web site） https://www.cbc.ca/news/entertainment/china-cracks-down-on-new-cartoon-taboo-1.586893 https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/how-chinese-animation-film-ne-zha-became-a-surprise-400m-hit-1230167 https://u.osu.edu/mclc/book-reviews/li-guo/