User talk:131.111.187.99
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Hello,
Can you explain why exactly you deleted large tracts of cited information regarding the 'Business model' and 'History' of Purplebricks? It also seems as though you haven't made any attempt to contribute yourself, I would think that you might like to add to, or enhance, those paragraphs through research as opposed to deleting them outright.
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- The stuff about the business model was not cited (random embedded external links are not cites) and was a steaming pile of marketese to boot. "Purplebricks in the PropTech – FinTech category experiences demand from those looking to purchase and rent residential property as well as those looking to purchase or rent commercial property and other real estate types" - or, in English, "people use Purplebricks to buy houses and other real estate", which is bleeding obvious, since it's an estate agent and that's what estate agents do.
- The history section was full of trivial information. Some of it was even mutually contradictory - Will Whitehorn and James Kydd managed to become directors in 2014 and 2015. 131.111.187.99 (talk) 12:27, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
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