User talk:2409:4060:2E87:EA84:0:0:CE8B:8002

Shami[edit]

Your edits aren't really helping here I'm afraid. To say "he picked a five wicket haul" is poor English, for example, whilst the IPL is clearly domestic - by creating a complex, compound sentence to start the article you're making things much more complex than they need to be - and harder for non-specialist readers to understand. The same is true about adding detail to the second paragraph and seam and swing - this is too much for the lead really. The hattrick stuff is way too much detail for the lead - if he was the first to do so, then maybe it belongs there. He isn't. It's not suitable for the lead section - it belongs in the body, clearly.

You need to deal with this sort of over-detail and understand what the lead is for. Blue Square Thing (talk) 07:19, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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