User talk:5secndrule/Kamanamaikalani Beamer
"Created" page Feb 22 2023
References
[edit]I'm not sure if I used the references right but I just put some sites down as a start for us! We just need to double check if we're doing it right and sift through what is usable. Most of them are news sources but I've been trying to see if they are neutral which one of them for sure seems to be. Anuhea702 (talk) 11:20, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
- I also looked through the sources and took down information that was factual rather than biased. I put them in the article body just to see what we have so far. Tried to organize the sources a little better. Something I realized: If we're citing the same source again (later in the article), we just do "cite" and reuse rather than copying and pasting the URL again. CeladonPygmy (talk) 19:03, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
Potential references
[edit]I figured this would be a good place to put down some of the potential sites or like mother sites to find more info from!
https://www.kamanabeamer.com/aloha-aina-action/in-the-press
https://kohalacenter.org/?s=beamer
https://mauinow.com/2015/05/15/kohala-center-president-receives-hawaii-book-of-year-award/
https://www.wnycstudios.org/podcasts/takeaway/segments/water-contamination-crisis-hawaii
https://oiwi.tv/ks/a-new-source-liberating-the-nation/
https://www.civilbeat.org/author/kamana-beamer/
chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/https://www.capitol.hawaii.gov/sessions/session2017/other/GM795_Beamer_Resume.pdf
chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/https://www.kohalacenter.org/docs/news/tkc/NEWS_20150503_HSA_CreamoftheCrop.pdf?_ga=2.225400089.207623162.1677582777-1959078815.1677582776&_gl=1*8h3i33*_ga*MTk1OTA3ODgxNS4xNjc3NTgyNzc2*_ga_H3EBHGPFG9*MTY3NzU4Mjc3Ni4xLjEuMTY3NzU4MzQzMy4wLjAuMA..
https://www.uhfoundation.org/impact/faculty/beamer-inaugural-chair
https://scholar.google.com/citations?user=w20NkpwAAAAJ&hl=en
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Winona_Beamer (his grandma has a wiki page and honestly I think we can find more about his personal life through her)
Anuhea702 (talk) 11:22, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
- https://www.civilbeat.org/2022/09/new-mauna-kea-stewards-will-need-to-balance-astronomy-and-cultural-values/
- https://hawaii247.com/2010/11/17/beamer-lectures-on-living-ahupuaa-nov-19-nov-22/
- https://www.manoanow.org/kaleo/features/wai-sovereignty-and-solidarity/article_2c72cdae-9b69-11ed-9376-6ff342c4a28c.html
- https://hawaii247.com/2015/01/15/beamer-selected-to-lead-the-kohala-center/
- chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/https://www.capitol.hawaii.gov/sessions/Session2013/Testimony/GM774_TESTIMONY_WTL_4-16-13.PDF
- https://www.kitv.com/news/local/oahu-community-leaders-to-speak-at-pio-summit-at-uh-on-concerns-over-red-hill/article_ab3c0046-7ca7-11ed-ab30-6be01b2b4bb6.html
- https://www.uhfoundation.org/impact/faculty/beamer-inaugural-chair
- https://www.hawaiiconservation.org/conference/2021-day3-keynotes/ Anuhea702 (talk) 07:18, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
Intro and overlaps
[edit]Just a little reminder to what we were saying in the groupchat: I'm going to try and tackle the introductory paragraph, and make it possibly 2-3 sentences long. I feel like more information will be in our page overall and overlaps are totally fine. 5secndrule (talk) 21:21, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- 3/29/23: I made the intro very short, as he has/held many notable positions that we will discuss later. 5secndrule (talk) 06:49, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
New revisions
[edit]Changed and revised the intro as well as education part. Going to try to start on rewording the remaining sources. Also for positions held I'm thinking we can just list them with the citation after or like writing a sentence for each position in its own paragraph. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anuhea702 (talk • contribs) 07:01, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- I was going to try and make a table? Idk I'll try some stuff 5secndrule (talk) 09:53, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
getting there
[edit]The box has some weird text in it. In the body of the article can you combine sentences? For example some of them read "He went to x. He got a degree there". merge. also can you flesh out what he has done, what was his dissertation on? Ortiz Crespo (talk) 17:16, 5 April 2023 (UTC)