User talk:Acidgirltogo/sandbox
Evaluation by Arakuresacred
[edit]Spelling/grammar: Meets standard It should be "in the form of a vibrant" instead of "in the form a vibrant". Also, in the last paragraph of the main body, the sentence "And has collaborated with" is a fragment. It has no subject.
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You did a great job. It goes into great detail. The research seems very thorough. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arakuresacred (talk • contribs) 03:51, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
Evaluation 3/18/18 by NiciaD
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- Note: Add 'the' to "with [the] center of focus in Lisbon". I don't think you need a comma after "started as a coup". Add 'ed' in "is primarily government sanction[ed]". "Out-reach" doesn't need a dash, just one word.
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- Note: Nice job writing about the criticism of street art without sounding like you supported one side or the other.
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- Note: I think that it would help readability if you added a subheading in the first portion of your draft.
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- Note: Just a little thing, but I don't think you need "and all of Portugal" in the first line, since you make this clear in the next few sentences.
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- Note: You were able to find quite a few scholarly articles on this topic and incorporate them.
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[edit]Great job on this, it was interesting to read about, and was definetly new information for me. Thanks, NiciaD (talk) 04:35, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
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- Note: "I would make the first introductory sentence stronger, adding details/ description words of humanisms rise in Nuremberg ===
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- Note: Good job on the blue links in your contribution. ===
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[edit]Meets Standard I like how your contriubtion was written in chronological order of events.
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Evaluation 3/21/18 by Jiayue
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[edit]Nearly Meets Standard Some grammar mistakes.
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[edit]Nearly Meets standard I think the organization should be more clear, for example, adding some sub-title to show the main idea of the paragraph.
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[edit]Nearly Meets Standard I think that you should add more information about the history of Steer Art in Lisbon because in the introduction paragraph, you mention some information about that.
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