User talk:Adecuir/sandbox

Group Comments

  First of all, good job on the beginning work to your project. However, the entire group needs to be posting in the group sandbox space. As you move forward into the drafting process, I would suggest that each member types their name by the section on which they are working. This will make it easier to see who is doing what. You also need to be expanding your citation's list. I am including a link to the Digital Divide in South Africa page. This is an example of about how much you should be writing for each section, though obviously your sections will likely not be identical to the South African ones. [Divide in South Africa]
   Remember, if you need any extra help come to mine or Dr. Benoit's office hours. Again, good work on your outline. 

Mmaggi9 (talk) 18:26, 11 October 2017 (UTC) Melanie Maggio: TA for LIS 2000

Group Comments for the Draft

First I would suggest that you edit your lead a bit, as you will need to include a more solid definition of the digital divide. This week you will need to finish your first draft, so you will need to finish writing up the entries for the rest of your sections and make sure you have all of your sources together. Please contact Dr. Benoit and I if you have any questions.

Mmaggi9 (talk) 03:52, 17 October 2017 (UTC) Melanie Maggio: TA for LIS 2000

Peer Review

The outline for the article looks really good! I think the first sentence of the lead is a good start to that section, but the rest could be worked on a little bit. I think you could add in some specific information about the divide in South Korea rather than just listing out the specifics of the article content. The history section is a little short, maybe add in a little more if you are able to find any more info. Based on the outline, I think the article will turn out well as long as you have a handful of really good sources to use.

Peer Review, Jahannes

The lead of your outline is strong, just make sure that you give a little bit more information on what a digital divide is. However still a nice lead. For the following sections make sure to add some details about each section entails with South Korea and their role in the digital divide. It seems as though you all are headed in the right direction with what information you want to focus on. Remember to have each member to work on a section so it does not get overwhelming and to cite whatever sources you choose to use.

Peer Review Response

In response to the peer reviews, I have gone back to add to the lead and began looking for new sources to use to expand the History section of the article. Adecuir (talk) 20:40, 5 November 2017 (UTC)