User talk:Ajaxthelesser

Rise of Medieval Infantry over Cavalry

I see you have been working on a new article. I have moved it to Infantry in the Middle Ages to provide a topical rather than essay-type title. I've left a few comments at Talk:Infantry in the Middle Ages about how to keep an encyclopediac rather than essay tone. It would also be worth reading Wikipedia:Writing better articles. If you haven't already, check out Military History wikiproject: a group of editors who work on military history articles. Good for advice, resources, and so forth. They have a style guide, and it's particularly worth reading their notes on sources and citation. One other thing: I found this article while searching for something else; it was an orphan (ie no links in). I've added links from other articles, so people can find it. It's always worth adding these in. You can see what links I've created here. Well done on tackling a large topic; hope you enjoy contributing to WP. I'm happy to help with any other queries you have. Gwinva (talk) 02:04, 6 May 2008 (UTC)