User talk:Alejandro.arzate

Ways of the warrior

Looking at this, I see a few problems. FIrst, the description of the meaning of the symbols in the shield is way too detailed. The page is supposed to be about the art itself. Second, there's too much use of BLOCK CAPS. Third, the difficulty of pronuciation & the intention of the "Founder" (again, no caps needed) isn't relevant. Fourth, I'm not seeing the need for explaining the "meaning" of the belt colors. Fifth, I don't see the equivalence of the belts to educational degrees, nor the need for including it. Sixth, reproducing the creed verbatim is both unnecessary & a possible copywright violation. Seventh, there's no comparison with other styles or forms, which would be a really good idea. Finally, you rely entirely on the website; you really need additional, independent sources to establish notability & to confirm the claims made. If I can offer other suggestions, let me know. TREKphiler ^{any time you're ready, Uhura} 21:18, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Alejandro.arzate/lima lama

Hello Alejandro.arzate. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "lima lama".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 21:22, 13 June 2014 (UTC)