User talk:Apelle1/sandbox
Mlan321's peer review
[edit]Look at first sentence, consider fixing grammar (and/or, autumn to fall) Mention how disease is contracted sooner in the first paragraph rather than it being the last sentence. In the sentence, "HFMD is more prevalent in rural areas when compared to urban areas, however, socioeconomic status and hygiene levels need to considered." put need to BE considered. Explain why kids that don't go to pre-k and kindergarten are more susceptible...kinda a random fact. Are there any epidemiological differences between race/gender/ethnicity? Overall great job!