User talk:Arakuresacred/Bycyklen
Spelling/Grammar
[edit]Does not meet standard. First of all, you spell Bycyklen multiple different ways throughout the article. In the first heading, it should be "Future", not "Futures". When you talk about paying for rides it needs to be a/your smartphone. the lithium battery assists riders, not assist. Kilogram needs to be plural at the end of that sentence. The heading "Manufacture" should be "Manufacturing", and in the first line I would change the wording to "Bycyklen are manufactured by the Danish company Gobike in Germany." Lastly, in the last paragraph, there are two spaces between "have" and "died".
Language
[edit]Meets Expectations What makes the Bycyklen artistic? This seems like an odd word choice.
Organisation
[edit]Exceeds Expectations
Coding
[edit]Meets Expectations I wouldn't italicise image in the last paragraph.
Validity
[edit]Meets Expectations Do you have a source for saying that they are "Copenhagen's most well known trademarks."?
Completion
[edit]Meets Expectations
Relevance
[edit]Meets Expectations I don't think that "by using Bluetooth" in the first paragraph is necessary.
Sources
[edit]Meets Expectations Your sources seem reliable, but 4 out of 10 are from the Cycling Embassy of Denmark.
Citations
[edit]Meets Expectations
References
[edit]Meets Expectations One source has what looks like an error on it, saying "line feed character in |title= at position 51 (help); Check date values in: |access-date= (help)"
Good job - NiciaD (talk) 19:06, 26 February 2018 (UTC)