User talk:Atvedt/sandbox

Hello, This is Hannah from class, this is an interesting topic and I can clearly see that when the article is finished it will be a very interesting read. I think when you add your intro you might want to add a bold statement about celluloid. Also when you use citations of authors i think it is okay to add your NPOV into the statement, and aybe use the cited author more than once as reference. It could really help. Um, i hope anything i said helps, and i know your article will be great. HannahSims (talk) 02:52, 3 June 2013 (UTC)